• Ragdoll X@lemmy.world
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    6 months ago

    roses are red

    you fucking buffoon

    i’ll gouge out your eyes

    with a rusty spoon

    • Gabe Bell@lemmy.worldOP
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      6 months ago

      That seems somewhat mean

      To use just a spoon

      If you use a sharp knife

      You’d finish more soon

      • ninja@lemmy.world
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        6 months ago

        use the spoon

        it is the intent

        for it to hurt more

        because it’s dull, you twit

        • Gabe Bell@lemmy.worldOP
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          6 months ago

          Ah now it makes sense

          I finally get it

          Although I think that last rhyme

          Is a little bit… crap.

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    6 months ago

    roses are red, the river is deep, please leave a message after the beep

    in case anyone else wanted to see it written out the “correct” way

    • Gabe Bell@lemmy.worldOP
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      6 months ago

      But once you do that, my poetic friend

      It just seems the rhyme, is wrong at the finish.