• littleblue✨@lemmy.world
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    11 months ago

    That’s a frank, honest, and rather helpful critique. At this stage of exploration here, much more could be discouraging, so that’s great!

    To OP: The whole piece is a confident result of hours in this style, and clear focus on a few key elements of it. Keep working on those and try out new concepts within the style as you progress. Have fun, and keep up the good work! 🤌🏼

    • Ashyr@sh.itjust.works
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      11 months ago

      I genuinely appreciate the critique critique. I was aiming for authentic, encouraging feedback from a layperson perspective.