• DrRatso@lemmy.ml
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    9 months ago

    I have, actually, read it 2 or 3 times by now. It has truly changed my life. For example, my GP now does not lecture me on my diet choices, because I can, honestly, tell them that I, mostly, eat different salads. I can feel my cholesterol dropping.

    • PraiseTheSoup
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      9 months ago

      You put six commas in a single sentence. That’s a lot of commas.