• Ech
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      17 days ago

      Weirdo with brain the consistency of cheese whiz (and skintone to match) forgets who he tried to kill

      My humble suggestion

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      17 days ago

      It’s a little better with punctuation:

      Weirdo whose brain has the consistency of—and face has the color of—Cheez Whiz forgot who he tried to kill.