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Cake day: August 7th, 2024

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  • Was auch alle eint: sie nehmen eine Regierung durch Nazis billigend in Kauf. Sie haben mit deren Agenda kein (großes) Problem. Wie viel Unterstützung für Nazis dich selbst zum Nazi macht ist in meinen Augen eine eher sinnlose Diskussion. Man kann aber unbestritten sagen, dass kein AfD Wähler ein Problem mit Nazis oder gar was gegen Nazis hat.

    Allein mit dieser Grauzone habe ich wiederum bereits ein Problem.



  • Interesting idea so looking at the getting better part, some feedback:

    • Your sentences were quite long and hard to understand in one read. The last part was easiest to follow. Try simpler/shorter sentences and way less commas
    • 1 and 2 sound very neutral. This makes it less engaging for the reader, there was nothing much to relate to. The “this is communism” at the end of the Subway part was a good start. Share your thoughts and feelings more and reduce the objective descriptions.
    • Section one feels unfinished. What happened after? How did others react to your ideas? Why did you choose these requirements.

    Last but not least: the headline made me feel like I’m in aneurysm posting. The headline doesn’t have to give away everything, try to find a common denominator and again: less commas. If you need more that 2, your sentence starts to get complicated.

    Looking forward to read more about your days and give me a ping when you start mapping Germany, I can recommend a few dishes:D













  • We once had a rescue like Willow. He decided to live behind a bunch of boxes and only came out when he thought he was alone. Even with the other cats he was like “nah”. Until one day someone dropped a toy made of fake fur and feathers close to his hideout. 180 personality change. He completely lost it and was so focused on this stupid thing that socializing suddenly was no issue at all if he was allowed to bring his toy. Bonus points and cuddles if you engaged in his play. It was fascinating.