Kyoyeou (Ki jəʊ juː)@slrpnk.net to Memes@lemmy.ml · 1 year ago"I simply wish to compose a completely ordinary sentence."slrpnk.netimagemessage-square40fedilinkarrow-up1512arrow-down139
arrow-up1473arrow-down1image"I simply wish to compose a completely ordinary sentence."slrpnk.netKyoyeou (Ki jəʊ juː)@slrpnk.net to Memes@lemmy.ml · 1 year agomessage-square40fedilink
minus-squareoriginal_ish_namelinkfedilinkarrow-up4·1 year agoThere is no reason to make your sentences complex. It just makes them harder to read Would you prefer While I was in the United Kingdom of England, Scotland, and Wales, I ordered the beverage of tea at a coffee shop. or I ordered tea in a British coffee shop. ?
minus-squareKyoyeou (Ki jəʊ juː)@slrpnk.netOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·1 year agoI fully prefer the second one, now sadly writing 25 pages is not my strong point, I usually am able to write 22 when asked 25, and being able to write a lot is today a skill that is valued for 3 points at least
There is no reason to make your sentences complex. It just makes them harder to read
Would you prefer
While I was in the United Kingdom of England, Scotland, and Wales, I ordered the beverage of tea at a coffee shop.or
I ordered tea in a British coffee shop.?
I fully prefer the second one, now sadly writing 25 pages is not my strong point, I usually am able to write 22 when asked 25, and being able to write a lot is today a skill that is valued for 3 points at least